Party Rental Guide

How to Write the Best Descriptions for Rental Bounce Houses.

People may want to get as much information as possible about your bounce houses before making purchase decisions.

People may want to get as much information as possible about your bounce houses before making purchase decisions.

Therefore, improving your descriptions can increase your conversion rate.

"64% of customers want to shop with companies that can meet their needs in real-time"

What does it imply to the product descriptions?

It simply means customers are more likely to be interested in products with good descriptions that provide all the answers to their questions in real-time.

Suppose you are searching for a bounce castle for your 10-year-old's birthday party. 

The first things you may want to know:

You got the idea here! 

If customers can't find answers to their questions in your description, they will not bother to contact you in most cases. 

Because it is easier for them to check other businesses' descriptions than contact you for more information.

Statistics to motivate you to write better descriptions. 

Did you know that 64% of returns are due to inaccurate product descriptions? 

Improve your bounce house descriptions so as not to get into conflict with customers and avoid negative feedback. 

Remember!

A good description can turn searchers into paying customers. A bad description, on the other hand, can send even motivated customers elsewhere.

How to improve the descriptions for rental bounce houses?

Provide these 20 things in your descriptions accurately.

  1. Product Name

Clearly state the name, make, model, brand, and other key elements to introduce your bounce house to potential customers.  

2. Dimensions

Provide the length, width, and height. And possibly required installation ground measurements.

3. Capacity

Mention the maximum number of children or weight limit. 

4. Age Range

Specify the suitable age group.

5. Theme/Design

Describe the theme or design (e.g., castle, jungle, superhero).

6. Material

Indicate the type of material used (e.g., vinyl, PVC). For example, if it is made with environment-friendly material, mention it too to attract environment-conscious customers. 

7. Safety Features

Highlight safety features like netted sides, soft walls, and secure anchoring.

8. Setup Requirements

Explain the space needed for setup and any surface requirements.

9. Power Requirements

State the power source needed (e.g., standard outlet, generator).

10. Included Accessories

List any included accessories like blowers, stakes, or repair kits.

11. Setup and Takedown

Mention if setup and takedown are included in the rental. If you charge additional fees for it, state it for transparency.

12. Cleaning and Maintenance

Assure customers about the cleanliness and maintenance of the bounce house. E.g., disinfection procedures, quality checklist, etc.

13. Rental Duration

Specify the rental period (e.g., 4 hours, full day).

14. Delivery Area

Define the delivery area and any additional charges for extended areas.

15. Weather Policy

Explain the policy for inclement weather.

16. Booking Process

Describe how to book the bounce house (e.g., online, phone).

17. Cancellation Policy

State the terms for cancellations and refunds.

18. Insurance

Mention if the rental includes insurance or if customers need to provide their own.

19. Customer Reviews

Include a few positive customer testimonials.

20. Contact Information

Provide clear contact details for inquiries and bookings.

Including these details can help ensure potential customers have all the information they need to make a booking decision.

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